Thursday, 20 February 2014

Notice Writing for Grades 11 and 12

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Where Are Notices Posted?
                     1. School Notice-Boards
                     2. Public Notice-Boards
                     3. Newspapers
                     4. Prominent Public Places.

The Formal Notice includes the following elements:
  1. Name of Organization (for official notices only)
  2. The Word NOTICE in block capitals
  3. Date (Adjacent to the announcement or below the announcement)
  4. Announcement
  5. Body including 1. announcement of the event 2. date, time, venue 3. important
          information or instructions 4. name of the person to be contacted for further
          details.
     6. Signature, Name and Official Designation of the issuer of the Notice.



This is how a notice looks.



Example 1



Example 2 On the Spot painting Competition



    

Example 3 (lost school bag)




 _________________________________________________

Example 4 Zonal Basketball Match


_________________________________________________________________________________


(Example 5 Notice for an apartment society board)



Note: Notices are placed within a box.

A few questions for practice are given below:




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Designing Classified and Display Advertisements

(How the Sharma family used Classified Advertisements to help them to settle in a new city )



We are going to see how both Classified and Business or Display Advertisements helped the Sharmas,  Shift to Delhi


The Sharmas had to relocate from a small town in Haryana to Delhi. They did not own a house in Delhi, and so had to rent one. Instead of hiring a broker, they decided to look at the classified columns of an English Daily and came across the following advertisement which contained the following value points:


PROPERTY FOR RENT
TO LET: Type of accommodation and built-up area/Location/ Features, furnished or not…etc./Expected rent/Contact address
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The Advertisement looked like this:

PROPERTY TO LET:

One two-bedroom flat, first floor, built-up area 1800 sq.ft./ Rohini Sect.4 /semi-furnished, servant quarter+garage/Exp. Rent Rs.15000/- p.m./Interested tenants may contact Shri B.K.Sharma, B-26, Kamla Nagar, Delhi 110007, Ph. No.234561/Brokers excuse.

VEHICLE FOR SALE: 




The Sharmas were happy with the details so they went ahead, contacted the landlord and fixed the deal with him. Next, they decided to sell off their old vehicle so that they could buy a new more fuel-efficient car. They decided to draft an advertisement for selling their car and these are the value points they worked on: Vehicle For Sale: make+colour/model/condition/price and contact address. The final draft of the advertisement (which they placed in an English Daily) was as follows:


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(FOR SALE- VEHICLES)
FOR SALE: One white Santro car/Model-2005/showroom condition, fully loaded, done only 35000kms./exp.price Rs.20,000/- Interested buyers may contact Mr Sharma, Rohini, Sector 04, New Delhi, Ph.No. 011-345897/Brokers Excuse.
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The Sharmas, now living in Delhi wanted to buy a brand-new washing machine. They pored over the display advertisements appearing in the English Dailies. They finally settled on the brand advertised as follows:  

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Special Festive Offer on BMG Washing Machines:

 Rs.2000/- Off*

Features:
Fully Automatic
Front Loading  
5 kg Wash Capacity
800 Spin Speed(rpm)
Rinse-hold 


Product Available at Nayar Electronics Kamla Nagar Delhi, Phone number 011-23569224
        *Conditions apply

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Recapitulation: Through this presentation, we have learned how Mr and Mrs  Sharma came across an advertisement under the: ‘PROPERTY,’ category with the help of which they were able to get a flat to live in. Since they had an old vehicle, and it was a liability, they drafted an advertisement to sell their old car under the  ‘For Sale’ category. Mr Sharma was able to get a good job in Delhi after his wife looked into the Situation Vacant Column of an English daily and identified a post that was suitable for her husband. The Sharma's old washing machine had broken down, so they were able to select a model that was to their liking - they were able to decide about the washing machine after looking at a display/business advertisement.

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The Lost and Found advertisements are usually for lost documents and pets



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LOST AND FOUND:
Lost one male Bulldog responding to the name Bobby/ height at shoulders 20", brown collar, white spot over left eye/ lost on the 25th of July at TDL Park at 6:30 a.m./Finder is requested to return or give information about the same to Mr Bharat Singh, B-26, Sect. 17, Gurgaon, Ph.No. 1234567/Finder will be highly rewarded.
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LOST AND FOUND: Lost one Indian Passport, navy blue colour, issued in the name of Arjun Kumar/bearing the serial no. J-123456/lost on the 1st of August, 2015, at Hong Kong Bazar at about 6:00 p.m./Finder is requested to return the same (as urgently as possible as the passport holder has to fly to America) to Arjun Kumar, G-22, Sect.54, Gurgaon, ph.no.0124-2567896/Finder will be highly rewarded.


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Given below is one example of the display/business advertisement:




Note: The display advertisement is based on propaganda techniques.It is meant to be convincing and persuasive.











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The Advertisements given below are classified advertisements, they can also be converted into Display or Business Advertisements with a few changes and graphics thrown in.
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EDUCATION:
Available Tutor for Maths for eleventh and twelfth classes/Home tuitions for individual students also offered/ excellent board results/reasonable fees/Interested students may contact: Mr S.K. Ahuja, B-26, Kamla Nagar, Ph. No.011-23840224.
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EDUCATION:
Apex Coaching Centre, Sect.14, Gurgaon offers coaching in all subjects from grades eight to twelve/flexible timings/expert tutors/pleasing ambience/excellent track record/scholarship for merit holders/Interested candidates may contact: The Director, Apex Coaching Centre, Ph. No. 8929852389.
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SITUATION VACANT:
Wanted two salesgirls for a garment store in Kamla Nagar/Min.Qual. 10+2/Preferably with one year experience in selling garments, pleasing personality/Remuneration: Rs.10,000/- p.m.+ perks + bonus/Interested candidates should contact with biodata and two references: The Proprietor, Goel Garments, Kolhapur Road, Kamla Nagar, Delhi, Ph.No.011-23840224

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SITUATION WANTED:
MBA from Harvard requires the post of Regional Manager in an MNC in Delhi-NCR/has two year's experience as Business Development Head in Google Inc. Singapore/Expected package, Rs.50.0/-Lacs annual + bonus+perks+paid holidays for spouse and self/Interested companies may contact, Mr Manoj Appleseed, 12/26, Rajouri Garden, New Delhi, Ph.No. 011-1267966
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MATRIMONIAL-GROOM WANTED:
Wanted groom for Gaur Brahmin girl/Director in MNC in Gurgaon/Height 5'4, fair complexion, pleasing personality/Age-29, prefer groom in age group 30-35/Interested Grooms to send details to Hindustan Times post Box No. 45, Kasturba Gandhi Marg, Delhi.
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Suggested Value Points for Classified Advertisements

VEHICLE FOR SALE:


  1. Brand + Make + Colour
  2. Model or year of Manufacture
  3. Mileage/condition
  4. Expected Price
  5. Contact
  6. Brokers Excuse (optional)
PROPERTY FOR SALE:

  1. Type of  Property+built up area in square feet
  2. Location
  3. Facilities
  4. Price
  5. Contact
  6. Brokers Excuse (optional)
PROPERTY TO LET:



  1. Type of Accomodation+built up area in square feet
  2. Location
  3. Facilities
  4. Rent
  5. Contact
  6. Brokers Excuse (optional)
SITUATION VACANT:
OR
WANTED:

  1. Post + gender + No. of posts
  2. Min.Qual.
  3. Preference ( skills, experience, sp.ability)
  4. Salary/Remuneration + Perks + Bonus
  5. Contact with Biodata + time period

LOST AND  FOUND: (Pet Dog)
  1. Breed + gender + name
  2. Distinguishing features ( height at shoulders, spot on coat)
  3. Place where lost
  4. Date
  5. Time
  6. Contact
  7. Reward
LOST AND FOUND: (Document)

1.Type of document + serial number +  name
2.Identifying features
3.Date
4.Time
5.Place
6.Contact
7.Reward

When do you use these headings?

1. The Lost and Found heading is used to announce misplaced documents like property papers, Bank Passbooks, Passport, or pets.

2. The Situation Vacant or Wanted heading is used when you are an employer and you are advertising for a vacant position in your firm.

3. The Situation Wanted heading is used when you are advertising your services for a prospective employer.

4. The For Sale heading is used when you want to sell your vehicle, household goods or property. Remember to differentiate by using Property For Sale or Vehicle For Sale or Refrigerator Sale or even Household Goods For Sale.

5. Use the To Let heading when you want to give your office space, flat, garage or building for rent.

6. Use the For Hire heading when you want to offer your vehicle for hire.

7. Use the Education/Educational heading to advertise your coaching services, tuition classes, or training crash course.

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Suggested value points for Display or Business Advertisements

  1. Slogan
  2. Statement
  3. Reasons why your products or services are good (at least three reasons)
  4. Special offer inside a callout sign.
  5. Statement
  6. Slogan
  7. Name of Manufacturer and address
  8. Conditions apply
Note: The display advertisement should be creative. It is placed inside a box. It should be eye-catching.



Revision Exercise:

1. You are Mr Ankit Chabra, draft an advertisement for selling off your L.G. double-door, 380 litres frost-free refrigerator. Mention all the relevant details. You have to sell off the refrigerator as you are migrating to Canada. 
2. Mr Neelkanth Sharma, the Country head of Lexar, Computer peripherals has a requirement for the regional head office in Gurgaon. You would like to rent office space, preferably on an independent floor with a minimum area of 4500 square feet, with good power backup and parking.
3. Mrs Bela Ram has just lost her property papers for her flat in DLF Phase II in the Mini Secretariat, Gurgaon. Fill in the required information for the same, and the USP.
4. The Rising Star, Public School, Sector 14, Gurgaon requires a Maths Teacher to teach grade eleven and twelve students. Draft an advertisement for the Situation Vacant column of an English daily. Furnish all the relevant details. Draft the advertisement on behalf of the Manager.
5. You are running an ad agency in Gurgaon. Draft an advertisement for a renowned property developer for residential flats in the lap of nature. Mention important features for the same.
6. Draft an advertisement for a Hair Shampoo aimed at teenagers. Mention all the important details including a list of reasons why this shampoo should be used, special offers, and the name of the manufacturer. Don't forget to mention the USP.
7. Draft a display advertisement for a health drink supplement that can be added to milk. Mention its health benefits, special offers, and USP.

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Note Making Skills Make You Better Learners !




These Symbols will make things easier!

It is important for students of all grades and subjects to develop skills in note-making and note-taking. Developing sound Note Making skills can be the key to understanding comprehension passages, treatises and many other texts.  Although the CBSE has removed note-taking in Grade twelve for the session 2020-2021, it is important to note that simply ignoring note-taking skills can be highly detrimental. Note-taking helps you identify the key points in the passage, and it helps you break up the passage into its key components. Developing note-making skills helps you summarise what you have read in roughly one-third of the number of words used in the passage. The Summary, which follows after you have written down the notes, is the final step in note-taking. Note-taking and summarising are two important skills that should be taught in earlier grades, like eighth and ninth. Note-making is an essential tool that helps students understand difficult treatises, passages and research passages in different subjects, not just English.

Learning Tasks:

1. The whole passage is read quickly and then the student tries to identify the Key Paragraph that contains the Nucleus Sentence. It is from the key paragraph that the student is also able to draw a title. In many cases, the key paragraph might be the first paragraph.
2. The passage is then divided into headings and subheadings ( I, II,III, IV, V, or 1,2,3,4,5). The numbers are listed on the outside of the margin.
3. Supporting sub-points are then listed in numerical order (1, 2, 3 under the first heading, then 1, 2, 3…etc. In some cases, there might be sub-subpoints where points might be listed as 1.1., 1.2., and sub-sub-sub 1.1.1., 1.1.2., 1.1.3., …etc. Depending on how these sub-subpoints develop. The numbers are listed inside the margins.
4. The students will use recognisable abbreviations and symbols in order to write down the notes in a contracted form.
5. The next task, following the note-making exercise, will include the drafting of the summary based strictly on the notes prepared by the student. The student should note that the word limit should not be exceeded, as marks will be deducted. Also, students should avoid repetition of ideas and make good use of sentence connectors to join sentences, thus avoiding too many repetitions of words.

Important Note: Generally, each paragraph is devoted to one topic. However, the same topic might be shared by one or more paragraphs. In such a case, students can merge two or more paragraphs under one topic sentence.
The marks distribution for the twelfth board CBSE paper is as follows:
1.       Title: 1 mark
2.       Notes ( at least three headings and the notes under them):2 marks (Content 1 Marks + 1 Mark   Coherence) Coherence refers to the listing, alignment, overall neatness.
3.       List of abbreviations (minimum 4) in a box: 1 mark
4.       Summary: 4 marks

Important: the final notes will be in the form of a linear listing of points, or in a branched format. A typical note-taking exercise in the linear format will look as follows:

Title:
1. Nucleus Sentence
   1.1 sub- point
   1.2 sub- point
   1.3 sub- point
2. Topic Sentence
   2.1 sub- point
   2.2 sub- point
   2.3 sub- point
3. Topic Sentence
   3.1 sub-point
   3.2 sub-point…and so on.

Important: Remember that notes that come under the headings (sub-points) cannot be written as sentences. Notes should be written only as phrases. As such, one needs to remember that full stops will not be used. Also, ensure that each sub-point is short and doesn't run into more than one line at the most!


Important Tips
The length of the notes will depend upon the length of the passage. The student will avoid noting down points which are being repeated for the sake of brevity. Also, use recognisable abbreviations, and avoid the use of articles, prepositions and conjunctions. This, however, does not mean that your notes are vague to the reader. Your notes should make sense to the examiner when he or she goes through them. Also, remember that you are not allowed to use sentences in note-taking. You need to identify the main points and not entire sentences. You need to have a minimum of three main headings. You need to have a minimum of four abbreviations. Remember to indent the notes properly.


Standard recognizable abbreviations for countries include U.P. U.K.
Standard abbreviations for titles include: Mr, Mrs, Ms, Dr, Messrs...etc
Common symbols include: &, +ve, -ve, >,<, ...etc
Common measurements: kg, lb, sq.ft. mm, ml, ...etc.



The Passage given below is in the form of an example. Go through it carefully and see how the Headings have been listed, followed by their supporting value points:


Strategic planning is typically thought of in terms of how large businesses and nations design a plan of action to accomplish their specific goals -- but it is a fabulous tool for individuals as well. If you find yourself disappointed by your life, consider taking a look at how strategically you are living it.
Some people worry that being strategic is about being manipulative. Certainly, there is a fine balance between passivity and trying to live life according to the "my way or the highway" approach to influencing the course of events. I think of being strategic as actively engaging in shaping and directing your life. It is about being thoughtful, careful, and purposeful -- the antithesis of simply drifting along being caught up in whatever situations and circumstances you happen to bump into in the course of your life. Strategic living means being smart enough to embrace the opportunity of playing an active role in determining what you are creating, promoting and allowing in your life.
If you were investing in a business, wouldn't you want to know that it was being run by individuals who were well-versed regarding the opportunities and challenges they faced? Wouldn't you want them to use their resources (people, money and time) in such a way that they maximised the company's short- and long-term return on investment? Most likely, it would be important to you that these returns be measured not just in terms of money, but relative to such other factors as alignment with the company's mission, and their commitment to such values as integrity, social consciousness and the quality of their relationships with employees and other stakeholders.
Now, let's apply this thinking to how you assess your own life choices. Being strategic is about getting off autopilot behaviour and being thoughtful about the choices you make in your life. It means living within the context of having a good understanding of who you are, what matters to you, and what resources and options you have available.
As a life coach, I work with this perspective as a means of increasing my clients' self-awareness, well-being, enjoyment and creative self-empowerment. Making thoughtful and strategic choices about how you live your life can have an enormous impact on your level of satisfaction and enjoyment.

There are three fundamental, ongoing, and interrelated activities involved in strategically living your life. They are: creating a plan, keeping track of results and altering your course based on those results and the unanticipated surprises life brings your way. A good strategist needs a great sense of humour and an appreciation for the power of the unknown because no matter how thoughtful and thorough your planning techniques, life will throw you curveballs. It's humbling, but the alternative of having no plan means being at the mercy of your life rather than being an active participant and driving force.

Our lives tend to be very complex and to include conflicting priorities and demands on our time. A seasoned life strategist is like a juggler trying to simultaneously stay on course with specific plans for each major aspect of his or her life. For example, you might have plans for your spiritual life, family, career, finances, etc. For a novice planner, I suggest picking one area of your life where you are experiencing the greatest challenges and starting there. As you stabilize one area of your life, develop a plan for another aspect and learn to develop skills in making the trade-offs that are necessary between the various aspects of your life.
(This article, written by Judith Johnson was posted on “The Blog, Huff post-Healthy Living” on 09/26/2013 12:17 pm)

Task 1: Identifying a suitable title from the passage

The importance of Strategic Planning
How we benefit from Strategic Planning

Benefits of Strategic Planning


Important Note: Avoid single-word titles. There should be a minimum of at least two words. Remember, your titles are important. Vague titles indicate confusion.
Task 2: Write notes under each heading from the passage

1. What is Strategic planning?
  1.1 plan of action
  1.2 tool for large org. & nations
  1.3 tool for ind.
2. Why is Strategic Planning important for people?
  2.1 helps bal. b/w passivity & trying to live acc.
  2.2 Antithesis to simply drifting
  2.3 smartness to embrace opportunities

3. Importance of Strategic Planning in Business
   3.1 provides knowledge about employees
   3.2 maximise short/long-term investments
4. Three fundamental steps in Strategic Planning
    4.1 Creating a plan
    4.2 Keeping track of results
    4.3 Altering course based on results
5.  How can we plan for complexities in life?
    5.1 Pick one area of life which is most challenged
    5.2 Start planning for it
    5.3 When you stabilise that area, dev. plan for another aspect
    5.4 Learn to dev. Skills in making trade-offs b/w various aspects of life


One example of the branched format for note-making is given as follows:

Title: Strategic Planning



There are interesting ways of making notes, but then, if it is about appearing for a specific exam, then the student will have to enquire about the formats that will be accepted by the examiner. Generally, the CBSE accepts the linear form of making notes.



Task 3: Draw a list or key for the abbreviations used by you in your notes

List of abbreviations:
1.b/w   :  between
2.ind.  :  individual
3. acc:  according
4. dev. :  develop
5. inv.  :  investment
Task 4: Draft a summary of the notes you made
 Write the summary in a specific number of words. In this case, the total number of words is a hundred and twenty. Note: remember to write the summary from the notes you have made, and try to stick to the word limit. The grid is for representational purposes and it can be drawn with a pencil and then rubbed off! Drawing a grid will help the student to stick to the word limit and a quick calculation will determine the number of rows and columns required. In this case, the student is required to write a summary in 120 words, so eight columns and fifteen rows will give you 120 boxes in which you can write 120 words. The advantage of using a grid is that it guides you about the number of words you have written without making you pause and count each word! You get a visual feel about how much space is left. To keep the summary short, avoid repeating ideas, use connectors like and, which, because, since, however, to join sentences.
Strategic
planning
refers
to
a
plan
of
Action.
It
Is
an
important
tool
used
by
large
organisations
industries
nations
and
Individual.
It
Is
important
because
it
provides
a
balance
between
passivity
and
living
according
to

Plan.
Strategic
planning
leads
to
smartness
in
embracing
Opportunities.
Planning
Is
important
in
business
because
you
need
to
know
the
individual
and
you
need
to
maximise
Short-term
and
Long-term
Investments.
The
three
fundamental
activities
in
planning
include
creating
a
plan,
keeping
track
of
results
and
altering
course
based
on
results.
One
can
plan
for
a
complicated
life
by
picking
up
an
area
of
life
that
is
most
challenged
and
starting
to
plan
for
specific
areas.
When
one
area
is
Stabilized,
start
on
the
other!

Total: 120 words

Important tips for the summary: 
The summary is made up entirely of the notes.
Paraphrase rather than copy the exact words of the author of the passage.
Use liberal use of linkers or connectors to reduce repetitions.
Don't compromise on fluency.
Write complete sentences, avoid using abbreviations and symbols.
Use third-person narration, indirect speech and past tense where required.
Supply a suitable title, not in one word, but at least a couple of words or a phrase.
Do not exceed the word limit of 80 words.

Exercise 1
Read the following passage carefully:



By Jen Laskey/Medically reviewed by Sanjai Sinha, MD

1. Did you know that your body weight is approximately 60 per cent water? Your body uses water in all its cells, organs, and tissues to help regulate its temperature and maintain other bodily functions. Because your body loses water through breathing, sweating, and digestion, it's important to rehydrate by drinking fluids and eating foods that contain water. The amount of water you need depends on a variety of factors, including the climate you live in, how active you are, and whether you are experiencing an illness or have any other health problems.

2. Water does more than just quench your thirst and regulate your body's temperature; it also keeps the tissues in your body moist. You know how it feels when your eyes, nose, or mouth get dry! Keeping your body hydrated helps it retain optimum levels of moisture in these sensitive areas, as well as in the blood, bones, and the brain. In addition, water helps protect the spinal cord, and it acts as a lubricant and cushion for your joints.

3. Adequate water intake enables your body to excrete waste through perspiration, urination, and defecation. The kidneys and liver use it to help flush out waste, as do your intestines. Water can also keep you from getting constipated by softening your stools and helping move the food you've eaten through your intestinal tract. However, it should be noted that there is no evidence to prove that increasing your fluid intake will cure constipation.

4. Digestion starts with saliva, the basis of which is water. Digestion relies on enzymes that are found in saliva to help break down food and liquid and to dissolve minerals and other nutrients. Proper digestion makes minerals and nutrients more accessible to the body. Water is also necessary to help you digest soluble fibre. With the help of water, this fibre dissolves easily and benefits your bowel health by making well-formed, soft stools that are easy to pass.

5. Your body loses fluids when you engage in vigorous exercise, sweat in high heat, or come down with a fever or contract an illness that causes vomiting or diarrhoea. If you're losing fluids or for any of these reasons, it is important to increase your fluid intake so that you can restore your body's natural hydration levels. Your doctor may also recommend that you drink more fluids to help treat other health conditions, like bladder infections and urinary tract stones. If you're pregnant or nursing, you may want to consult your physician about your fluid intake because your body will be using more fluids than usual, especially if you're breastfeeding.

6. There's no hard and fast rule, and many individuals meet their daily hydration needs by simply drinking water when they're thirsty, according to a report on nutrient recommendations from the Institute of Medicine of the National Academies. In fact, most people who are in good physical health get enough fluids by drinking water and other beverages when they are thirsty, and also by drinking a beverage with each of their meals, according to the Center for Disease Control and Prevention. If you are not sure about your hydration level, look at urine. If it is clear, you are in good shape. If It is dark, you are probably dehydrated.

1. Prepare notes on the above passage. Remember to supply a suitable title for the passage. (4 Marks)

2. Draft a summary in not more than 100 words for the above passage. (4 Marks)


There are some more passages for practice below.

Read the following passage carefully and answer the questions that follow.
 1. How does television affect our lives? It can be very helpful for people who carefully choose the shows that they watch. Television can increase our knowledge of the outside world; there are high-quality programmes that help us understand many fields of study, science, medicine, the different arts and so on. Moreover, television benefits very old people, who can’t leave the house, as well as patients in hospitals. It also offers non-native speakers the advantage of daily informal language practice. They can increase their vocabulary and practise listening.
2. On the other hand, there are several serious disadvantages of television. Of course, it provides us with a pleasant way to relax and spend our free time, but in some countries, people watch television for an average of six hours or more a day. Many children stare at the TV screen for more hours a day than they spend on anything else, including studying and sleeping. It’s clear that TV has a powerful influence on their lives and that its influence is often negative.
3. Recent studies show that after only thirty seconds of television viewing, a person’s brain ‘relaxes’ in the same way that it does just before the person falls asleep. Another effect of television on the human brain is that it seems to cause poor concentration. Children who view a lot of television can often concentrate on a subject for only fifteen to twenty minutes. They can pay attention only for the amount of time between commercials.
4. Another disadvantage is that television often causes people to become dissatisfied with their own lives. Real-life does not seem exciting to these people. To many people, television becomes more real than reality and their own lives seem boring. Also, many people get upset or depressed when they can’t solve problems in real life as quickly as television actors seem to.
5. Before a child is fourteen years old, he or she views eleven thousand murders on TV. He or she begins to believe that there is nothing strange about fights, killings and other kinds of violence. Many studies show that people become more violent after viewing certain programmes. They may even do the things that they see in a violent show.

1. Prepare notes on the above passage. Remember to supply a suitable title for the passage. (4 Marks)

2. Draft a summary in not more than 100 words for the above passage. (4 Marks)


Read the passage carefully and answer the questions that follow.

1. Some people say that the best defence is a good offence; an octopus, however, would disagree. In addition to being one of the strangest and most beautiful creatures in nature, the octopus has some of the most inventive and effective defence mechanisms imaginable. While other animals have teeth, horns, or claws to help defend themselves from predators, the octopus concentrates its energy on hiding from and confusing its attackers. When it wants to get away, the octopus has an impressive arsenal of tricks at its disposal.
2. The most well-known of the octopus’s defence mechanisms is its ability to squirt clouds of ink into the water. Some octopi use this cloud of ink as camouflage; after squirting the ink, the octopus retreats into the ink cloud, where the predator cannot see it. Other octopuses use the ink cloud as a decoy. If a large, intelligent predator such as a shark knows that octopi use ink clouds for camouflage, it might simply attack the ink cloud blindly, hoping to make contact with the octopus inside. However, some sneaky octopi will release the ink cloud in one direction and scurry away in another direction, leaving the predator with nothing but a mouthful of ink. In addition to confusing predators’ sense of sight, these ink clouds also confuse their sense of smell. The ink is composed primarily of melanin (the same chemical that gives human skin its colour), which can shut down a predator’s sense of smell. If an octopus cannot be seen or smelled, it has a much higher chance of escaping an attack.
 3. Camouflage, another defence mechanism possessed by many octopi, refers to their ability to change colour, much like a chameleon. Most animals get their skin colour from chemicals in the skin called chromatophores (melanin is one of these chromatophores). Chromatophores might contain yellow, orange, red, brown, or black pigments, and the amount of each pigment present in the skin determines an animal’s colour. While most animals are always the same colour, some species of octopi can control the amount of each colour pigment in their skin cells, allowing them to change colour. Some poisonous octopi, when provoked, will change their skin to a bright, eye-catching colour to warn predators that they are dangerous and ready to strike. Other octopi use this ability to change their skin to the colour and texture of seaweed or coral, allowing them to blend in with their environment. Finally, some octopi—such as the mimic octopus—use this colour-changing ability to masquerade as another type of animal. The body of an octopus is highly flexible, and some species can combine this flexibility with their colour-changing skills to make themselves resemble more dangerous animals such as sea snakes or eels.
4. Yet another defence mechanism possessed by some octopus is the ability to perform autotomy, or self-amputation, of one of their limbs and regrow it later. Many species of skink and lizard also possess this ability, which allows them to shed their tails when caught by a predator and therefore get away. When a predator catches a tentacle, the octopus can amputate this tentacle, thereby unfettering itself, and regrow the tentacle later. Some octopus, however, are even cleverer. When threatened by a predator, these octopi will shed a tentacle before being attacked in the hope that the predator will go after the detached tentacle rather than the octopus itself.
5. While the octopus may not be the most vicious creature in the ocean, its numerous and clever defence mechanisms help it to survive in the dangerous undersea world.

1. Prepare notes on the above passage. Remember to supply a suitable title for the passage. (4 Marks)

2. Draft a summary in not more than 100 words for the above passage. (4 Marks)



III. Read the following passage carefully and answer the questions that follow.
1. Given the general awareness of the woeful condition of our State schools, it would be surprising to find someone not engaging a private tutor or two, if he could afford it. We, the urban, articulate and decision-making top 5% of Indians, perfectly understand why only the rarest of rare among our politicians and bureaucrats send their children to a state school. They’re not for people like us; they’re for people like them. And so, in 21st-century India, we are immune to the fact that the vast majority of Indians will be educationally deficient, uncompetitive in most contemporary skills and quite unable to raise their standards of living through the straight route.
2. Our complacency does not get shaken by the alarming rate of growth of the private tuition industry. This industry is exploiting the mediocrity that has spread even to our private schools. Attempts by the state governments to ban private tuition have failed because the schools’ managements don’t cooperate. Indeed, they often sabotage these moves. The common practice is to first deny the teachers their just wages and then look the other way when they try to make it up by giving private tuitions. In some states, teachers are forced to sign bonds that bar them from giving private coaching, but this promise remains on paper.
3. Parents are both perpetrators and victims of this pernicious system. The hedonism bred by free-market principles has led to the commodification of education. Those who can afford it, recruit private tutors because it gives their children an edge in competitive examinations.  The vast majority of people cannot afford tuition and, therefore, fall behind. The national objective of the society, where every child gets equal opportunity, is lost.
4. When the NCERT began working on developing a new National Curriculum Framework in 1999, one of the objectives was that the course content should be set keeping in mind contemporary realities and global trends. To have both parents working is more the norm than the exception in modern India. The pressures of the workplace don’t allow mothers the time to assist their children anymore. To prevent young parents from falling into the tuition trap, several steps, including the introduction of grades in place of marks, were recommended. Long-forgotten recommendations made on education, like the Yash Pal Committee’s report of 1990, which recommended lighter school bags, were brought out of the backburners.

a) Based on your reading of the above passage, make notes on it using headings and subheadings. Use recognisable abbreviations (minimum four) and a format you consider suitable. Supply a suitable title for it.                                                                                                                                               5 Marks                                                                                                                                      
b) Make a summary for your passage based on your notes                                                           3 Marks